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Miss Lois YaBB Moderator Offline I Love Superman Posts: 349 Location: Earth Joined: Aug 7^th, 2008	FDK - Poison- 1/? Aug 24^th, 2008 at 11:48pm
	OOOH Goody.This is a good start. Just one suggestion - you don't have to do so much explaining in Author's notes - all that info can, and should be, in the body of the story.

	Those who say it can't be done should get out of the way of those who are doing it.
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jj_the_elusive Cub Reporter Offline Clois- my OTP :) Posts: 101 Location: new joysey Joined: Aug 11^th, 2008	Re: FDK - Poison- 1/? Reply #1 - Aug 25^th, 2008 at 6:13am
	I love it! I really enjoy stories where Clark and Lois are married and have more children, it's adorable Also, the plot itself is very interesting and smart, which will also definitely keep me reading the subsequent chapters. Good job! I anxiously await more!


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repmetsyrrah Ex Member I Love Superman	Re: FDK - Poison- 1/? Reply #2 - Aug 27^th, 2008 at 10:00am
	Miss Lois wrote on Aug 24^th, 2008 at 11:48pm: OOOH Goody.This is a good start. Just one suggestion - you don't have to do so much explaining in Author's notes - all that info can, and should be, in the body of the story. Thanks, I'll try and see if I can manage that, I guess I just need a bit more confidence in my writing. jj_the_elusive wrote on Aug 25^th, 2008 at 6:13am: I love it! I really enjoy stories where Clark and Lois are married and have more children, it's adorable Also, the plot itself is very interesting and smart, which will also definitely keep me reading the subsequent chapters. Good job! I anxiously await more! Thanks! I'm having a lot of fun with the kids and the rest of the family. Glad you like it. It's not going to be all that long (although there is a sequel) but I'm glad the plot is keeping you interested.


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