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FDK- Revelations- 24/?
Oct 16th, 2010 at 12:50am
 
A/N: Sorry for the lateness, for those that haven't heard, my city was recently hit by a large earthquake and the clean-up and repairs to our house have taken a while. Thankfully, through a combinations of luck, timing, luck, building codes, luck, readiness and more luck, no one was killed and everyone I know was unhurt though several of my neighbour lost their houses and our house was damaged too. If you want more info, (You need to Login or Register to view media files and links) is the wiki entry on the quake and (You need to Login or Register to view media files and links) is thepost at ES.c with pictures of the damage to my house.

I have to apologise also, if this chapter seems strange, half was written pre-earthquake and half was written post-quake. As it was an incredibly stressful event I can't help be afraid my writing style changed slightly, in fact there were several things taken out of this chapter because I couldn't remember what had been happening. So I'm really sorry if it's noticeable, though my beta thinks it's post-worthy. Next chapter is entirely post-quake though, so it should be better.

I have also never gone to Harvard Law School and never been accused of cheating on any exam using x-ray vision so I must also ask for suspension of disbelief if I get something wrong in that respect- but I can imagine dealing with a situation like Sophie Kent's would be unique and therefore require a unique solution.

Reviews are love!
  
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Re: FDK- Revelations- 24/?
Reply #1 - Oct 16th, 2010 at 12:55am
 
WEE. We're back, you're back, we're all back.

I can't help but feel that somethin bad is going to happen in that anechoic chamber. (soundproof room.) And poor Clark, still trying to keep it all together.
  

Those who say it can't be done should get out of the way of those who are doing it.
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Reply #2 - Oct 16th, 2010 at 8:01pm
 
Nice part.  Clearly the US Government is behind the  whole thing. The outing of Superman, the spying on him and his children, the test taking room, everything.

Soundproof room, haa, it would make more sense to have a lead lined room so clearly it is a trap.
  
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Reply #3 - Oct 17th, 2010 at 2:30pm
 
I don't think it's the US government - they surely gain more by knowing who Superman is, while pretending not to know; amongst other things, that would let them act without warning if they ever perceived the Kents as a threat. Plenty of other governments, terrorist organisations, crime families, etc. etc., of course.

I hope Clark can cope once it really sinks in.

Sorry to hear about the earthquake, hope you weren't affected too badly.
  

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