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FDK - The Return - 14/15
Mar 15th, 2010 at 10:16pm
 
Thanks for the credit, though I'm fairly certain any reasonably bright author could have come up with these helpful story elements - kind of a convergent story evolution.  Much of the Movieverse body of work was also inspired by other writers:  Author C. Clark, Robert A. Heinlein, David Weber, along with some incredibly talented fanfic authors.

Now for the important part:  I'm really enjoying this story.  As you may have guessed from (You need to Login or Register to view media files and links), I like a universe with Supergirl in it and I really like the thought that seems to have gone into your tale.  I can't wait to see how this ends.
  
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Re: FDK - The Return - 14/15
Reply #1 - Mar 15th, 2010 at 10:43pm
 
I also like that with this chapter, he reminds the reader (in a rather chilling fashion) that as much as the AI at the fortress seems like a technological ghost of Jor-El, it is in fact NOT Jor-El....
  
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Re: FDK - The Return - 14/15
Reply #2 - Mar 18th, 2010 at 9:32am
 
Well done part, but I fail to see how you can wrap it all up in one more part.
  
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Re: FDK - The Return - 14/15
Reply #3 - Mar 18th, 2010 at 12:28pm
 
Working on it - there may be an epilogue though.
  

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