Mr. Beeto Cub Reporter Offline Long Live the Movieverse Posts: 198 Location: Warren, Michigan, USA Joined: Aug 10th, 2008 FDK - The Return - 14/15 Mar 15th, 2010 at 10:16pm Thanks for the credit, though I'm fairly certain any reasonably bright author could have come up with these helpful story elements - kind of a convergent story evolution. Much of the Movieverse body of work was also inspired by other writers: Author C. Clark, Robert A. Heinlein, David Weber, along with some incredibly talented fanfic authors. Now for the important part: I'm really enjoying this story. As you may have guessed from (You need to Login or Register to view media files and links), I like a universe with Supergirl in it and I really like the thought that seems to have gone into your tale. I can't wait to see how this ends. WWW YIM IP Logged
Brin_Londo5 Cub Reporter Offline I Love Superman Posts: 178 Location: Missouri Joined: Oct 8th, 2008 Re: FDK - The Return - 14/15 Reply #1 - Mar 15th, 2010 at 10:43pm I also like that with this chapter, he reminds the reader (in a rather chilling fashion) that as much as the AI at the fortress seems like a technological ghost of Jor-El, it is in fact NOT Jor-El.... IP Logged
framework_4 Cub Reporter Offline I Love Superman Posts: 71 Joined: Aug 18th, 2008 Re: FDK - The Return - 14/15 Reply #2 - Mar 18th, 2010 at 9:32am Well done part, but I fail to see how you can wrap it all up in one more part. IP Logged
Marcus Rowland Cub Reporter Offline Posts: 83 Location: London, United Kingdom Joined: Aug 17th, 2008 Re: FDK - The Return - 14/15 Reply #3 - Mar 18th, 2010 at 12:28pm Working on it - there may be an epilogue though. Marcus L. Rowland&&Forgotten Futures: The Scientific Romance Role Playing Game WWW IP Logged