jj_the_elusive wrote on Mar 28
th, 2009 at 4:08am:
I still can't get over how amazing this story is both in plot and writing...That chapter had my heart pounding!
It was a fun one to write. I'll point out that my take on Luthor is someone who astonishingly narcissistic, who really believes that he's the smartest man on the planet and expects everyone else to acknowledge that and give him accolades for his genius. Of course, he's also impatient and too full of himself to see any flaws in his plans, so it's enraging for him to be outsmarted or to have someone point out his mistakes or that he's
not all that after all.
framework_4 wrote on Mar 28
th, 2009 at 5:18am:
Nice part. So Clark still has to take the long fall. Nice. I hope you aren't planning to end it anytime soon.
Well, this was the end... of Act II. I've still got enough in my head for a short third act.
Thietje wrote on Mar 28
th, 2009 at 7:47am:
How long will it take for Clark to retrieve them? Oh, and when the Kryptonite is finally purged from the matrix, will it keep growing and eventually recreate Krypton?
They won't get left there indefinitely, but I'd expect the criminals retrieval to be a low priority for the next little bit. They will be brought 'home', and I have some interesting thoughts about how we do that. As for 'New Krypton' - that process is going to take awhile, but perhaps we'll get some clues about its final configuration in the coming chapters.
Thanks for the comments, everyone.