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FDK - All That Matters 5
Dec 12th, 2008 at 5:25pm
 
Starting the thread  Cool
  

Those who say it can't be done should get out of the way of those who are doing it.
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Re: FDK - All That Matters 5
Reply #1 - Dec 12th, 2008 at 9:04pm
 
Whoah. I'm really not sure exactly how to respond to chapter 5.  Big revelations all around.

Richard seems to be taking this ... I dunno, a little too well, maybe? He and Lois really need to talk this over further in depth (not necessarily on-page, mind you), as this is really world-shaking news as far as the two of them are concerned. I'm not sure that just one night of honest talking, even a long one, would be enough to salvage a relationship that was already unsteady...
  
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Re: FDK - All That Matters 5
Reply #2 - Dec 13th, 2008 at 6:19am
 
well thank you for not making richard act like a jack*ss. Loving this fic so much!
  
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Reply #3 - Dec 13th, 2008 at 6:32am
 
While I like Lois to end up with Clark, the way you are writing Richard seems very much in line with the way he was in SR.

At this point he seems to be planning for the worst. Almost like he had been steeled for it for years.

Looking forward to more.
  
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