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FDK - Guardian Angels 9
Dec 12th, 2008 at 4:55pm
 
Starting the thread  Shocked
  
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Re: FDK - Guardian Angels 9
Reply #1 - Dec 12th, 2008 at 8:18pm
 
A beautiful (and entirely JUST) trap laid for Luthor.
AND, one heck of an explanation of how he got in past the force-fields set up in Superman II, I must say.

And the Phantom Zone? Nasty, but, as I said before, entirely just.
I also like the declaration of the Fortress as a Kryptonian Embassy, and the use of a Kryptonian Council Of Justice in this part. BIG echoes of General Zod's sentencing on Krypton before it was destroyed...
  
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Re: FDK - Guardian Angels 9
Reply #2 - Dec 13th, 2008 at 6:35am
 
Well done. I have to say your use of the memory crystals really helps with the whole backward spin thing. I am delighted that Lois and Richard know.

So I assume the man stepping from the shadows is Bruce Wayne?

IIRC we won't see another post in this tale till next Friday?
  
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Reply #3 - Dec 13th, 2008 at 7:01am
 
You know what happens to people who assume... Roll Eyes

Once a week seems to work fairly well but it's close to finish so I may post it sooner - depending on how fast I work.
  
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Reply #4 - Dec 13th, 2008 at 7:55am
 
Miss Lois wrote on Dec 13th, 2008 at 7:01am:
Once a week seems to work fairly well but it's close to finish so I may post it sooner - depending on how fast I work.


YAY!!!!!  Cheesy
  
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Re: FDK - Guardian Angels 9
Reply #5 - Dec 13th, 2008 at 5:02pm
 
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Great story.  Ditto the others comments.
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