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FDK - Confessions on a Football Jersey
Nov 16th, 2008 at 9:52pm
 
Starting the thread Cool
  
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Re: FDK - Confessions on a Football Jersey
Reply #1 - Nov 17th, 2008 at 7:00am
 
reviewed on FF.net but I thought this was just adorable! I love how pissed Lois was that Clark had her keys - definitely an 'oh shit' moment!
  
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Reply #2 - Nov 17th, 2008 at 10:51pm
 
Yeah, that was indeed a moment, there, but I loved the way Lois suddenly quit relying on her eyes and decided to use all of her senses...
and the sneaking suspicion that once again slipped into her mind...

"Gotcha!"
  
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Reply #3 - Nov 18th, 2008 at 4:31am
 
What will they do now that she knows?
  
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Re: FDK - Confessions on a Football Jersey
Reply #4 - Nov 18th, 2008 at 7:51pm
 
Darn good question...

PLEASE let there be a third (or more) parts to this. I think this is one of the best, AND most subtle, 'reveals' (at least as far as continuations of SR) so far.

Simple, yet subtle, and without a lot of drama around it. You know, taking place in the "quiet moments".

And this one proves that there CAN be a good SR story without Lex Luthor (or his schemes) having anything to do with it.

(Now if only HOLLYWOOD would realize that. Hey, can we see Brainiac or Metallo, or someone ELSE as the BBEG in the next movie, huh, Hollywood???)
  
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Re: FDK - Confessions on a Football Jersey
Reply #5 - Nov 18th, 2008 at 8:07pm
 
I have always preferred the quiet and subtle reveal, preferably with Lois putting things together rather than Clark doing something stupid (like tripping into the fire).

The subtle whiff of smoke following Clark out of the elevator...  :Smiley
  
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