Kit Kaos wrote on Sep 30
th, 2008 at 5:18pm:
I know I should have seen that coming, but I didn't!

Isn't life just full of surprises?
Kit Kaos wrote on Sep 30
th, 2008 at 5:18pm:
I especially love the Lois/Clark interaction and could hug Richard for having to see how well those two click - and for learning the hard way, as well.
Well, that wasn't a happy surprise for Richard, and there could be a rough road ahead for him for the next little bit. Thanks for the comments
framework_4 wrote on Sep 30
th, 2008 at 11:50pm:
Delightful part. I love Kara letting the cat all the way out instead of leaving Richard in a limbo of doubt.
I wanted to get that settled early - and that
Clark was the biological father. It'll still not a easy thing for Richard, however.
CKB wrote on Oct 2
nd, 2008 at 2:41am:

I'm pretty sure I heard a smacking noise in the fic. You know, the one crap makes when it hits a fan.
Yep, it's hit the fan all right.
CKB wrote on Oct 2
nd, 2008 at 2:41am:
Poor Richard. He had to find out the really hard way about Jason. I can't wait to see how every one reacts next.
It'll probably be tough for the next little bit.
Thanks, everyone, for the comments. There's more coming, and I hope you'll continue to find my take on this interesting.