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jj_the_elusive Cub Reporter Offline Clois- my OTP :) Posts: 101 Location: new joysey Joined: Aug 11^th, 2008	FDK- Family Reunion ch. 17 Sep 18^th, 2008 at 2:47am
	Interesting play with the science, and very believable might I add. Nice touch with the ending and killing two birds with one stone. Seeing Kara, Lois got all of her answers indeed!


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Mr. Beeto Cub Reporter Offline Long Live the Movieverse Posts: 198 Location: Warren, Michigan, USA Joined: Aug 10^th, 2008	Re: FDK- Family Reunion ch. 17 Reply #1 - Sep 18^th, 2008 at 11:07am
	jj_the_elusive wrote on Sep 18^th, 2008 at 2:47am: Interesting play with the science, and very believable might I add. Thanks. I'm always a stickler for trying to come up with something plausible - suspension of disbelief shouldn't be a struggle. It can be challenging at times to reconcile that with canon. I'm glad the techno-babble worked this time. jj_the_elusive wrote on Sep 18^th, 2008 at 2:47am: Nice touch with the ending and killing two birds with one stone. Seeing Kara, Lois got all of her answers indeed! I kind of liked that myself. Someone's got a lot more 'splainin' to do! The next couple of chapters should be fun, I think. Thanks for the comments.


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CKB Cub Reporter Offline I Love Superman Posts: 14 Location: TN Joined: Sep 19^th, 2008	Re: FDK- Family Reunion ch. 17 Reply #2 - Sep 20^th, 2008 at 1:17am
	Holy Shemolies that was good. I loved the fact that Lois figured out Jason's paternity just by seeing Kara. Loved her demanding an explaination from Clark. I can just visualize him freaking.<G> Also, you explained the time folding in a way that I could understand. Having Kara show up and apologize to Lois was cool too. There is no way she can fail to realize that Clark is Superman now. BTW, will Jason have heard the conversation between Lois, Clark and Kara? He has to have seen Kara disappear even if Richard and Jimmy haven't.


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Mr. Beeto Cub Reporter Offline Long Live the Movieverse Posts: 198 Location: Warren, Michigan, USA Joined: Aug 10^th, 2008	Re: FDK- Family Reunion ch. 17 Reply #3 - Sep 20^th, 2008 at 2:11am
	CKB wrote on Sep 20^th, 2008 at 1:17am: Holy Shemolies that was good. I loved the fact that Lois figured out Jason's paternity just by seeing Kara. Loved her demanding an explaination from Clark. I can just visualize him freaking.<G> Wow, I hardly know what to say to that compliment. I'm pleased that you enjoyed it. CKB wrote on Sep 20^th, 2008 at 1:17am: BTW, will Jason have heard the conversation between Lois, Clark and Kara? Good question. I haven't explained my resolution for the 'fragile' little boy that tosses grand pianos, but when I do, I hope it'll make sense. Don't want to spoil it, though. Thanks again for your comments.


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tb Cub Reporter Offline I Love Superman Posts: 1 Joined: Sep 2^nd, 2008	Re: FDK- Family Reunion ch. 17 Reply #4 - Sep 24^th, 2008 at 12:30pm
	This is a great fic. I am really enjoying it. I like how Lois is caught up in different emotions and is trying to manage them.


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Mr. Beeto Cub Reporter Offline Long Live the Movieverse Posts: 198 Location: Warren, Michigan, USA Joined: Aug 10^th, 2008	Re: FDK- Family Reunion ch. 17 Reply #5 - Sep 25^th, 2008 at 1:14am
	tb wrote on Sep 24^th, 2008 at 12:30pm: I am really enjoying it. I like how Lois is caught up in different emotions and is trying to manage them. I'm glad to hear that you're enjoying it.


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